SilentOllie

I liked the rhythum in your poem, very nice, and word choices and vocabulary was well put.

This poem seemed very dark in the beginning for me; but the sadness reflects in an almost peaceful, and accepting way- which evens it out really nicely. I've personally never ...

A question: how do you make love stories without them sounding sappy and way to over done? I'm trying to find a way to do that, and yet, it's just ...