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Hi :) I'm going to do a structure/theme/clarity sort of review, as it seems Vapor and SassyKat already have the grammar-y part covered. I like the Dr. Seuss-esque style, however, ...

One review, as requested! :) I love the raw emotion. I totally get what you are trying to say, and I think it's very relate-able. I wouldn't really consider this ...

Aaron "Leroy must have stashed his cache in a closed down section or he'd already know. That place is called the Nursery. It's where they house test subjects under the ...

Your awesome because you figured out how to get a moving avatar, and you have more then a thousand points more then me!

Here I am to tel you how awesome you are :) Really, this is amazing. Powerful and deep and sad and haunting and also kind of creepy - but the ...

(OOC: got to go to bed :( )

Aaron "Sub four." I clarified. I cracked my knuckles. It made me feel like a character in a book, like this was a story and I could close the book ...

Aaron "I found a tunnel under the tile and got out when no one was looking. I knocked the doctor escorting Xia to weapons testing unconscious, and I killed the ...

(OOC: I dunno. Have they started yet?) Aaron "I'm trying to escape. We set off the second alarm. I'm Storm. Who are you?" one of the girls said. "Aaron." I ...

HiIAlreadyRenamedYouWantACookie?

(OOC: okay, okay, if I must :)) Aaron I climbed back up the ladder that we'd come down, listening through the sealed vent. I heard voices, two girls and a ...

(OOC: byyyyyye!!!)

(OOC: Bela + Sar-Sar, remember, the opening has been kinda melted shut.... And Bela (or qaralynn) you'll have to reply and when you do make sure you say if we ...

(OOC: Bela + Sar-Sar, remember, the opening has been kinda melted shut....) (OOC: got it. Aaron will now proceed to twittle his thumbs and wait for either the opening to ...

(OOC: I KNEW IT!! I KNEW I was missing something!!! Oh, well, just pretend that post never happened, then) Aaron : I leaned against the wall and played with the ...