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It was the pig that did it, but he couldn't have succeeded with out the ice cream double-fudge-apple-crisp peach-pit cherry-tomato pepperoni-pizza rotting-wood hard-tack beef-jerky pie.

Gary Piddle.

'My sign is vital, my hand are cold.' From Human, by the Killers. 'Are we human or are we dancers?' From Human, by the Killers. \ 'Just gonna stand there ...

Hello, my name is Jace and i've almost died more times then I care to keep track of.

Sarea Dancing is a fallen angel, stranded on earth until farther notice. Demons, hungry for the immortalizing properties of angel blood, hunt Sarea by night. Humans, blissfully unaware of the ...

Wow. This is the best thing I've read on here today. I loved the cliffhanger on the end. I love how there is almost no information about the MC, but ...

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I really like this, and i think it sounds like the beginning of something. Maybe you should add on to it. Also, i don't get how the beginning of it ...

All my critiques and nitpicks and comments are going to be in bold. I lay beside the man I've been blessed with and turn so my abdomen, large with child ...

I like this, but i think you need to make it longer and add more description. Have fun with it, make something interesting happen.

Nice, ReisePiecey. Considering how short this is, i suggest you use it as preface or something. I like how even though its short, its intriguing. it makes me want to ...

Nice, funkyreg101. I suggest putting in a little more description, and maybe some dialogue. You could definitely make this longer, and i would like to know where your character is ...

Sooooooooooo cute!!!! You could serious make this an actual story, though. I don't think i could write this well when i was six . . . you had very interesting ...

Jace "Power is a little overrated. I would want some, sure, but than even more complete strangers would be trying to kill me, and i get enough of that already. ...

I just kind of randomly came up with this, very spur-of-the moment. Enjoy! The clock chimed two. I closed my eyes, groaning. Why did the moon have to be so ...