Sierra

I really liked this. A little more emotion would be nice, though. Keep writing!

I suggest you shorten it up a bit. It was a bit much to take in. Other then that it was very good.

First of all, fix the format. It's very hard to read in one block of writing like it is now. Make several paragraphs. Other then that is was VERY good. ...

I really liked this. I have a few critiques and comments: *The point of view was a little weird; sometimes it was first person, and sometimes it was second person. ...

Please, someone, comment! please!

Wow. Just WOW. This is absolutley completely amazing. I could feel all of the emotion, all of the pain. Wonderful. I have no nitpicks. Your doing NaNo? Me too! This ...

This just kinda came up. I don't know if i should add to it or not, but i'm considering entering it until a local writing contest. This is my first ...

Welcome, Melinda! I'm a very gloomy. A lot people say my work is depressing. I've written some short stories, some on fantasy and others on worldly themes such as poverty, ...

"Mawiage!" The Princess Bride

I only like one flavor of ice cream. One flavor only.

Petroc

I've noticed reading books that are similar to what i'm writing help me not get writer's block, because i don't get ideas for other stuff. Twilight has recently been helping/not ...

I'm writing a novel and re-reading Twilight at the same time, and its definitely rubbing off on me. My main female character is starting to look like Bella Swan! Her ...

Nah, your not being too hard don your characters. As long as their pain is happening for a reason, its okay. Think of Harry Potter or Jacob Black.

Mine is easy. Broken: the sequel to Fragile Things.