Sierra

Nice. I like the repetitiveness, and the emotion was really good too! I like that the narrator was an assassin, the hesitation, everything. :) Sierra

I'm walking through these empty halls , F filled with memories of you , S surrounded by a silent darkness Y your feelings break through . And I feel your ...

Awww, this is sweet. I like how you captured the confidence of a girl in love, and how sure she is that everything will work out. Because it's true, we ...

If life were so simple, why would the bitter rage continue to stay ? As if my atti t ude define d who I was. But I know there was ...

HI! I'm Sierra, and I'll be you're reviewer today :) Hehe, I know I'm only thirteen and this is rated 18+, but rules are meant to be broken :) Personally, ...

Flowing through your being, silently You think your dreaming. This is my favorite stanza. I really like the way it flows. It changes who you are, slowly Soon you've gone ...

Inside the envelope there is nothing. Nice opening line. It hooked me right away. Rippling words that flowed over paper And dripped, tasty, from red lips have failed me. This ...

Wow. This is really cool. I love the new take on Jesus. The beginning is kind of confusing. I couldn't tell who was talking, and why, and who they were ...

I like it :) Very haunting. I especially loved the ending. I would like to see more emotion, more feeling. When he's running, how does he feel? Is he terrified? ...

Shrieeeeeeeeeek. Creepy. I'm looking over my shoulder right now to make sure there's no skeleton lady behind me. I love the descriptive, simpleness of it. Kind of beautiful in a ...

Hehe, cool. 8/10.

Yay! Nixy finally gets flash fiction!!! Welcome to the world of fragmented stories bouncing around in your brain! But now, back to business. I liked it. A lot. The beginning ...

Love it!!!!! ('Course I do, they're all me) The last one looks a little strange though, my face looks kinda distorted . . .

I wrote this about fifteen minutes ago, so it's like, not edited, not proof read, just spell checked. So please do not kill it. It's just a baby :smt003 She’s ...

I don't really like this much. I had to write a poem about tolerance/intolerance for my language arts class, and this just kind of happened. I would like it if ...