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Re: Hello, my name is...
Hello, my name is Brigid. Now get off my airship.
Aug 9, 2012 -
Re: First Paragraph Feedback
7/10 This is definitely engaging. Love the first part--its abruptness, combined with how ridiculous it sounds, makes it pretty funny. As for the rest--it certainly leaves me wondering how the ...
Jul 23, 2012 -
Re: You know you're a writer when...
You know you're a writer when you read your characters' dialogue out loud (and respond to it) as if the characters are actually in the room with you.
Jul 23, 2012 -
Re: Ask a stupid question...
Because when God was creating the planet Neptune, he sneezed and splattered his blue paint all over the sky. Why does the sun shine?
Jul 18, 2012 -
Re: hehe, Character Q and A
Q: What's your full name and what is its meaning? A: Aster is my only name. It is a derivative of the name Astrid. Astrid Calvin was the lead scientist ...
Jul 16, 2012 -
Re: What would your characters do?
He would ask me why I enjoyed confusing him so much, and I probably wouldn't have a good answer for him. "I would bring Astrid Calvin back to life. She ...
Jul 13, 2012 -
Re: My Little Writing Prompts(To Challenge Us)
Hello, there. I haven't checked this forum in a while, so I just found this. I have a scene that would fit under "fast-paced action." It's the prologue to my ...
Jul 12, 2012 -
Re: What would your characters do?
"I have never understood why humans choose favorite colors. Although I am one of the most advanced specimens of artificial intelligence ever created, that aspect of human psychology still puzzles ...
Jul 12, 2012 -
Re: hehe, Character Q and A
Q: What is your full name and what is its meaning? A: Centurion Zea of Alvaria. In the Old Language, Zea means lightning, or goddess, or something like that. Q: ...
Jul 6, 2012 -
Re: hehe, Character Q and A
Will, from Isabelle's story. Q: What's your full name and what is its meaning? A: William Henry Murdoch. I don't know what it means, and I don't have the time ...
Jun 7, 2012 -
Re: the riddle game.
Ninja is right with 50 lbs. ;)
Jun 7, 2012 -
Re: What would your characters do?
Isabelle: Not too much, actually. My father died a few years ago, and I haven't spoken to my mother since she disowned me three months ago... What would your character ...
May 17, 2012 -
Re: the riddle game.
Nope, not a hundred pounds. It's weirder than that. ;)
May 17, 2012 -
Re: the riddle game.
Clarification for number one--how long does he live from an outsider's (non-time-traveler's) perspective? And Noninjas--it's not 99 pounds. :)
May 12, 2012 -
Re: Rate the first sentence above you
7/10 - Intriguing, but vague. Not very descriptive, but it leaves me wondering where the narrator is and what is rustling. Except for the fiasco in the kitchen, that fateful ...
May 10, 2012