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Fabien, thanks so much. I'm pleased you enjoyed it. And Sam -- haha, yay. I'll be taking a look at Hourglass sometime soon.

The song was originally written by Leonard Cohen. I prefer the Jeff Buckley version, myself. Welcome to the site!

HOTLINKING FROM FACEBOOK LOL

Hm. Well, not sure if I'm taking a look at the most recent edit or the first draft, so I will just make general comments: The beginning was fantastic -- ...

The prologue, though beautifully written, seemed to drag for me. It may have something to do with my impatience (like, get the story ON with already!), but the writing there ...

Thank you very much, Nyconz. Glad you enjoyed it. Sam, I just editted the first post with the final (hopefully) revision. I will PM you right now. Aw, you are ...

A very ... how should I put it? Straightforward poem. It wears its emotions on its sleeve, your poem does. Unfortunately, it is not enough to intrigue me. While I ...

Aha. Oh Bob, you never disappoint. This is a fantastic piece. It is beautiful because its personal -- and I can't relate. There's something romantic and untouchable about it, all ...

Eh. Jig, I'm sorry, but this fell a bit short for me. No doubt, the piece has it's strong moments. Your descriptive language is superb, despite your tendency to go ...

Hey, Sam, I love you. But really, thank you for your honest critique. In regards to what you've said regarding the ending, I wasn't quite going for a plastics v. ...

Stev, Thank you kindly, not only for the generous critique, but just for bothering to read. I will return the favor. Lyndsey

Okay, it's up. -Takes a nervous gulp of air-

The Difference Between Landmines and Time Bombs Written March 28, 2007. For Lauren: May you be the substitute for no one. I. Reese Ryan was one of those girls. You ...

Aw, Snoink. Thank you for the encouragement. I appreciate it so much. One of the things I most admire about Williams' A Streetcar Named Desire is the role reversal. You ...

goldie. goldie, goldie, goldie. do they not teach you anything in "somewhere 'twixt the ceiling and the floor?" monkeys are the be all and end all in the writing world! ...