Shriek

YAAAYFUN. Added. ^_^

Wow. WOW. Thank you all SO much for the reviews! I'm sorry I couldn't have thanked you sooner--I wasn't even aware that my silly little story was recieving this attention. ...

Oooh, cliffhanger. The style of this, to reiterate, is definately original and creative. Slight nitpick: I didn't like that you left off periods at the end of someone speaking. I ...

Ahaha, the 'Nate being away' option made me laugh. I have no complaints. I feel that the literary forum moves at a decent pace, and yes, critiques are scarce at ...

I saw War of the Worlds with my four guy friends, who, apparently had very high expectations of the film. They were dissappointed in it because of the huge plotholes ...

Ah. What is with you two and naming poems after songs/bands? Then again, I really shouldn't be talking... At any rate, your second explanation for the title (and thunderstorms "fall" ...

POWER TO THE UNDERACHIEVERS! (Orsomething...) Welcome to YWS! I'm Lyndsey, or Shriek as most people call me. Great to meet you!

Oooh. I really liked this. I didn't think any of the imagery was excessive. Even the smallest detail can change the outcome of the picture as a whole. I loved ...

Ah, I liked this. The third stanza was a favorite here, especially these lines: "I let our sadness become written down, pressed to the other side of pages, where someone ...

Haha. Wow. I liked the poem, but the explanation behind the poem was AMAAAYZING. Kudos to you, Snoink.

Hm. There isn't much to be said that Brad hasn't already touched upon. I liked most of the descriptive words you used, although you were a tad redundant at times, ...

I liked this very much. To reiterate what someone before me said, I enjoyed the way you used "Any other Thursday" to tie different thoughts together. I especially liked this ...

I liked that. It was well written, and aside from a few spelling errors and missing apostrophes, gramatically correct. You have just enough description and dialogue, neither overpowering the other. ...

I SEE A BATHTUB!!! (Awh, Jack. From the look on your face in that first picture, you'd think your pet goldfish had just died.) Muse--Prettypretty as usual. I like the ...

Eep. I'm not a fan of this title at all--not just because I'm from Ohio and cannot stand the band Hawthorne Heights. I dislike the title because I've seen it ...