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Yeah, I always feel like I need toadd in a little footnote when I talk about my brother's autism in stories--just because not a lot of people have been exposed ...

Wow, thank you! I will definitely look into playing around with the wording so that the 'you's and 'I's make sense. However, I would like to leave the brother part ...

Haha, I think I'm going to do that as well. There is no way the book can top the musical, what, with the music being by Steven Schwartz and the ...

The ending was a little weird...I hear the book's ending is much different and much more depressing... Ahah. I thought the musical version's ending was depressing--granted, I haven't seen it, ...

Jesus Was Gother Than You. Written November 4, 2005 Personally, I don’t understand what everyone finds so attractive about you and that lime green makeup you powder over your eyes ...

I really liked this. It was short and sweet, but it really struck me. Though Lottie didn't give much more than a brief description of her life, it felt as ...

Ahaha, that made me laugh so hard. I don't know if it was meant to be a satire on all those emo songs such as "Slash My Wrists with Your ...

-Takes breath in- My thoughts are: 1) This piece is VERY well written in the descriptive writing sense. You certainly know how to use your adjectives powerfully--a little too powerfully ...

The end was overdone/melodramatic, yo. Or, something. Agreed. Although, I suppose it was fitting because of the way you characterized them as a sort a beast. Great mental image. Other ...

Hm, I like that idea, Dan/Griffinkeeper. Also, in addition to having a special forum for film, a music discussion forum would be nice as well. ^_^

Hi! My name is Lyndsey too (but with a 'y', obviously). Welcome to the site! I look forward to reading some of your stuff. ^_^

Wow. I can't even write a sentence without using the letter 'e', but you wrote this entire story, going above and beyond by packing it with emotion and wonderful imagery. ...

9 because I like the quotes. They're kind of harsh, but sooo true. And Duskglimmer: Aha, I'm OBSESSED with the song in your siggy. ^_^

"Simply" by Pillar

Mesh, it looks like you guys had a nice time at band camp. Better than I can say for a couple of my friends, who told me their band camp ...