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Wow, the first one is scary! Which congress member did you go with? I second the question. I agree that the mall picture is great. I just visited DC last ...

This was great. Reminded me of The Sun Also Rises in the sense that it portrayed the recurring empty indulgence so well. Although much more poetic than anything Hemmingway could ...

^ "Voices."

LOVES it. Great portrayal of emotion here. However. (Gosh, I hate to sound redundant, but) I had difficulty telling the difference between voice 1, 3, and 4. Four in particular ...

Awh, this was sweet. Very well done. Just out of curiousity, what does your dad do for a living?

"Untitled" by Faith Also "Cold" by Duskglimmer I read both of these shortly after arriving at YWS, and they are part of the reason I was convinced to keep submitting ...

Gah, this was sad. I was able to hold off the tears until I read the final verse--that was a hard-hitter. I liked the emotion behind the narrator, especially that ...

Haha, congrats on the win by default. This was a very enjoyable read. Kind of morbid in some parts, but overall pretty suspenseful. I felt that the beginning was a ...

Ladies and gentlemen of YWS, boys and girls of all ages, I now present to you the most impressive photobooth picture in the history of existance! Not one, not two, ...

John Mayer...and whoever thinks he's hott must be blind. John Mayer is not the best looking guy on the planet, I'm not gonna lie. But he makes musically and lyrically ...

Awh. I can relate to the narrator's feelings so well in this (except for the fact that my ending wasn't as fortunate). I liked it a lot. You definately get ...

Kayleigh: Hey, thanks! I was beginning to regret giving this the title it has, so I appreciate your (and Dusky's) comment. Bob: I asked my english teacher today which was ...

It seems uncanny that just as I've finished writing a research paper on "A Streetcar Named Desire" and Blanche DuBois, I stumble across this. According to my paper, you've done ...

If at first you don't succeed, destroy all evidence that you tried.

I liked this! I usually don't read too much fantasy stuff (it confuses and bores me) but this was a very good peice. Solid writing and grammar, an interesting plotline. ...