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Holy crap, Snoink. That first picture is gorgeous . Where was that taken?

Ah, so Snoink finally posted a short story, I see! I liked this very much. At first, I didn't really see what the entire purpose of Alyssa looking at the ...

-Mouth waters- Brilliant descriptions there, better imagery than I could ever pull! But agreed with Chandni13: I didn't quite get the rhythm either... Also, caught this typo: Filling you nostrils ...

Why hello! Yes, I do have an affinity for parody threads! (Or at least parody titles...) Anyway, you're a good cartoonist. I didn't really care for the comic because I ...

Haha, for serious? Could that actually ever happen? They (meaning Gaston and his cronies) would probably have to tie Belle down and torture her before they got her to consent. ...

This is the best I've seen from you yet, Brad. I liked it very much. The pre-chapter was powerful--it said a lot about the character and life, in general. Or ...

Hm. This would have been hilarious if I weren't such a stiff. I smiled at the lice line, though.

Hm. I personally am not a fan of the morbid, "I hate my life" kind of poetry (I'm not a fan of poetry, in general), so I guess my critique ...

Well, the second part was much better than the first, grammatically speaking. So congratulations on your improvement. However, you need to work on placing commas, periods, etc. If the reader ...

10. I love it (and want to steal it for myself)!

29. That was tough! It made me laugh, though. Nice work. -Applause-

I'm usually not one for knocking a person's critique of my critique... So I won't. :D Uhm. But what I said still stands. I guess it's just a matter of ...

Hey, Stev! Glad to see you're still alive and well (and writing some pretty good stuff while you're at it). I liked this a lot, and I think it is ...

Ooh, I liked this. Like Muse said, it's a light read, which was refreshing in contrast with all the serious pieces out there now. I disliked the kiss at the ...

Wow. I liked this a lot. It was a plain and simple enough story line, but the effective use of dialect and characterization were what gave this piece its power. ...