Shriek

As a rant, this was perfect. As a story, however, I felt that this was... lacking, somehow. Charlie and Gwennan, from your description, sound like they're from two completely different ...

Wow, I loved this. The plot is an intricate weave of emotion, the writing is breathtakingly real. The first and second sections were my favorites. The description of the smell ...

You Can’t Prick Your Enemies. (January 6, 2006) Writing practice and nothing more. A bit of silliness, really. Prick, they call her. Though her real name is Lucia-Maria Marcella Carasello ...

Oh, how the mighty Coldplay has fallen. And to Green Day, good gosh! -Grumbles- Uhhh. We're going to go with Nightwish vs. Yellowcard

Coldplay vs. Green Day

Words of wisdom, Snoink. Thanks for sharing.

Right.

The beginning stanza hooked me. Needless to say, it was wonderful. The bulk of the poem was well written too. Loved the stabbing of eggs and greasy pizza imagery, to ...

Sometimes I feel like dividing a book into parts has no purpose. Unless, of course, you're analyzing it in English class ( Ethan Frome being a prime example...) But I ...

Yay. I like this idea. Props to Nate and the mods.

This is a great idea, a great concept. However, the ending line isn't clear, which leads to a great disappointment and overall, a misunderstanding of the story. To answer your ...

(I'm reviving this. And I'm not sure why.) "Listen," Mary Beth says. "I brought you here because I need your help." I choke on my drink. " You need my ...

This was exquisitely written. I just wish I could have left the story feeling a little less confused that I did when beginning it. I guess I'm just not used ...

Please for God's sake do not compare me to THAT author! I hate her! Ohh, oop. I sometimes do that . . . -Shuffles feet, tries to look invisible- Sometimes ...

Ari - Shhhh. No one's supposed to know! Muse - Thankeeh. Haha, the Belle Doll is awesome! I have one too ... that is still in a box. It's one ...