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Ahah, sweet ending. This was incredibly well written, and you certainly have a flair for comedy. I guess my biggest crit would be that this moves a bit fast. The ...

Wow, I liked this. Nice job, TBR! Unfortunately, I must be off to bed now--but I'm definately going to nitpick it for grammar and such tomorrow. I owe you one!

Sarah: Thank you for the compliments! As for your critiques, I found them all really helpful--and I'll definately revising this sometime soon (hopefully this weekend...! -Crosses fingers-) Thanks agai

My mom likes Smooth Jazz. I can't really get into it... -Shrug- I love Keiko Matsui, though. I have her one cd called Dream Walk--absolutely friggin' fantastic stuff there. --- ...

Oh, haah. Whoops. I fail when it comes to interpretation--sorry! Nice work!

Ahaha, thanks everyone. Yeah, band offs are quite the shizz. Lots of energy, and really fun to watch (contrary to popular belief.) I'm going to miss high school. -Wimpers- Emma: ...

Neither do I. Maybe it's a Canadian thing...? lol No seriously, I like this. It's funny. My only complaint is, don't you have to make a hoola hoop go really ...

^ Is a very important member of the YWS. Without her excellent writing, positive attitude, and hilarious comments, it's safe to say that YWS would not be as wonderful. In ...

9. Dahaha, it's sweet! Always gives me a chuckle. I gotta learn how to make one of those moving ones... (Jennafina: My avatar is Aslan from Narnia. But it is ...

^ Is a fiend in the blogs section! He always has some witty remark or thoughtful comment to make on just about every blog--and always seems to make the first ...

Welcome to the YWS! I'm Lyndsey, nice to meet you. -Extends hand- Hope you have a great time on the forums--I can't wait to see some of your work once ...

My first thoughts upon reading these reviews from the two of you: O.O AIIIEEEEEEEEEEE! -Dances around the room in pure ecstacy, doing what she does best--shrieking- I think I must ...

8. Definate words to live by, there.

Oooh, you are a very multi-talented person. I can't play sports for the life of me... :/ Welcome to the YWS--I can't wait to read some of your stuff! Lyndsey

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