Shriek

This is excellent, Brad. Though I'm sure much of the deeper meaning went over my head, I did appreciate the images this brought to mind--especially the bit about the "foreign ...

"I like this poem, dont' you? I think it's actually one of the best things I've written in a long time." I completely agree. In no way am I a ...

I liked this. To echo Jack, it's simplistic and easy to relate to. Again, it needs punctuation. That basically covers what I was going to say. Nice work. (Oh, and ...

Oooh, love that last line. Actually, I love this entire thing. It's more personal, more emotional than the first. Just the right amount of description and dialogue. Picturesque descriptions and ...

-A malicious grin slowly spreads across face- Trouble? Sorry, I'm not quite familiar with the term. I jest, of course. I've always been one for stirring up things. It dates ...

There are no words... It reminded me out of something out of Captain Underpants , to be completely honest. And I love Captain Underpants. Nice work, Grif.

I really like this. It's honest and it's clever and there's no philisophical puzzle to figure out. It's just genuine emotion, and--the ending was a good one. Nice work.

I agree with Hekategirl on her suggestion with the ending. Other than that, I have no critiques, only praise. I liked this very much. I found it short and sweet ...

Ahh, sibling love and soccer. Two things I know absolutely nothing about.

Five Iron Frenzy. Genesis. Not a very long list, but they're quality bands, yo.

Awh, I love this. I'm not really one for pointing out grammatical errors and whatever on personal pieces--leave the writing to the heart, not the head is my philosophy. And ...

I don't read. I know that's the stereotypical answer for those averaging 1.6 who lack enough motivation to fill a teacup--but I'm not some stereotypical, unmotivated bum. I average a ...

Emma: It looks gorgeous, dahling. It's a very mature cut, I think. Razored and sleek looking. -Thumbs up- Ari: -Grins- Thank you! You're sweet... And thanks to everyone else who ...

There was lots and lots of pink cake. An outdoor barbecue, green grass, blue skies--perfect day. Dani made me a photo frame--she's always had that artistic edge. Beads, lace--that frame ...

In that moment, I was ripped from reality. The dark bar, Mary Beth with it, began to spin furiously. A flash of bright color, vivid yellows and greens and marroons--and ...