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Thank you, Dreamy. Your reply was very encouraging. I have plans to submit it to my University's literary magazine. I have encouraged another college-age member YWS to do so as ...

The Difference Between Landmines and Time Bombs Reese Ryan was one of those girls. You know, one of them . She was the mere embodiment of the word “captivating.” She ...

i love second person.

Ari. I've read this piece more times than Jack, honest to goodness, and the only critique I could come up with was over one word in the first paragraph: "Her ...

Hm. It's good, not great . Firstly, the writing here is gorgeous. Smudged clouds, smeared colours, pale beaches, clumsy hands, little smiles, sharp edges -- all marks of a writer ...

And Suzanne, I just did some investigation and she killed herself the same year the book was published, 1963. The book was published in January of 1963 and she was ...

The Bell Jar was tragic and frightening and morbid and beautiful all in one. I cannot begin to express how much I admire Plath for being able to recount her ...

Very, very cool.

first reaction: ew. second reaction: "tossing aside my white dress as you come down as golden rain" SWEET LINES! third reaction: wait a second ... ew. donne is fascinating, though. ...

yep! back row, middle! and yeah, i editted. my university is a bit -COUGH- ... strict. cleavage is a no no, so editting is necessary. :) um, wow. russian and ...

last night in cleveland: dorm life: FIND ME! ps: wiggy and clau, looks like you had fun. i want to meet a ywser!

Usually, I just try to find a first/last name combo that sounds alright. Sometimes there will be deeper meaning behind it, other tiimes no such luck. At any rate, the ...

...but I still have doubts that anyone will be able to post their stories on there ever again. Why do you say that?

apply for any and EVERYTHING. scholarships, and just to schools. even if you think the chances are nil that you'll be going there, apply anyway. you might change your mind, ...

I kind of figured that by the time I got back around to critiquing this, it would be heavily unneccessary (seeing as there are three pages of opinion here), but ...