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backgroundbob is just so clever. i didn't like that "and said," was its own line -- but what do i know?

gummy, not sure i understand the title. i adore the images in the first three lines, although the "slitting the wrists" thing is a bit extreme in a poem this ...

"So Q'zartialanis ... That's, like, Arabic, right?" The would be co-star batted her eyelashes innocently. "Yep." John reached for her hand and held it awkwardly, right then and there. The ...

i concur. check out the 'stache on Teddy Roosevelt: i don't believe it is possible to be manlier.

well said, grif. i agree wholeheartedly, that game is in extremely bad taste and mr. danny ladonne should be ashamed of himself.

Eh. It didn't catch my eye, nor did it pique my curiousity. Of course, it does present of the question of who or what fails to thrive? but at the ...

dear fand: you seem like a neat person, from your pictures. oh, and you're pretty, but you didn't need me to tell you that. from, lyndsey dear flemzo (may i ...

brad: regarding the first issue, it was not my intent evoke emotion. however, i am smarter than to shirk off your comments, and know that i have to make changes ...

TBR: i love you. cadmium: ah, thank you. that was a nice response. i understand that i need punctuation, but i'm just afraid that too much of it will screw ...

Lyndsey Loves Daphne Loves Derby written January 16, 2007 I hate you and your broad shoulders pompous mouth big word collection and what does that even mean anyway when you ...

The Writers Corner sounds excellent, Nate. You are the coolest site admin evaaar, and I'm NOT just saying that. =P

Two all-nighters in a row? Why...?

OH MAN. That was cute. ... But, really, that's all it was: cute. As a matter of fact, you are a pro at cutesy. You've mastered the art of all ...

Snoink: Thanks for the nitpicks. I just revised those two problem spots as you suggested. And yeah, the beginning still doesn't feel right -- and it's driving me crazy! Gahh. ...

Muse, ah. that explains things. my best friend's dad is a photographer ... but he doesn't take any pictures of us. jerk. Emotionless, you're very pretty. AND SO IS ARE-FRICKIN'-IDA. ...