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you are so SO good. that is all.

good wow?

Well, obviously this poem isn't suffering from lack of criticism, so we'll see what I can add. I liked it. It's honest, it's smart. It gives and it takes. In ...

i wish i had more people to nominate. i don't get on this site enough. :( Best Story Overall Best Story in Each Category --Action/Adventure Fiction --FanFiction --Fantasy Fiction --Historical ...

we're real classy, here in america. nothing says new year like ryan seacrest, hannah montana, and a stogy in the front yard.

Oh, wow, Gadi! Thank you very much for your critique. I have already put some time into cleaning up the minor parts you pointed out ("urban community," "four AM," etc), ...

I joined YWS February 20, 2005. I thought I was a strong writer. I thought I had everything figured out, in terms of the world, God, what have you. Now ...

This was so, so good. I have no idea where you get off saying that I am inspiring when really it is you, my friend, who have the upper hand ...

You know what? We really do have entirely different styles. That having been said, be prepared to take everything I type here with a grain of salt: Overall, I felt ...

Amelia , kudos to you for reviewing not one, but BOTH of my trashy pieces, especially because we have entirely different styles (or so it seems). Thank you for making ...

Alleycat, thank you for your time. I appreciate your thoughts. If you can think of any more feedback as to why the end wasn't effective, please let me know. That ...

I am one of two catholics (I'm not even kidding about that, I make up 50% of the Catholic constituency here) attending a baptist bible college with a student body ...

jihad today is an especially hard day, so i crawl out the window, sit on the roof and have a beer with God. the yard is a smooth black lake. ...

Snoink, Ahg. There is a very likely chance that you're right about that last section ... I can't make up my mind. Either way, it's been submitted. We'll see what ...

I was sourly disappointed by it. I found it cheesy, and very cliche. Also, being a novice musician, the fact that I could tell that most of the actors could ...