Shredderman

He stood trembling atop the bailey of the crumbling castle, faraway fireflies of destruction flickering in the shine of his eyes. He quickened his pace. At dawn, the river would ...

I enjoyed reading this piece, but as the previous reviewer noted it, grammar, spelling and punctuation are a definite must. Some parts of your story seemed a bit vague and ...

I read with a sort of morbid fascination. It was extremely engaging, and you could really tell from the vocabulary you used not a sense of depression or sadness or ...

Oh wow this had me going until the end, which cracked me up. At first I thought this was about aliens, then fairies, then insects, and I was getting more ...

it definitely captures the spirit of a loving parent looking on at their child, or even perhaps, somebody retrospectively looking at their past self. mesmerizing!

had me hooked from the very start. I loved the way you spun a mesmerizing and detailed backdrop to the story that not only was consistent with your prompt but ...

I’m up early, Way before school. To watch the sunrise. Don’t tell anybody. this is really nice That ruins it. The grumpy moonlight clouds, Shove and growl, Away. To show ...

The lady in the fur coat slipped her sunglasses on. It was time. She paid the bill for her untouched coffee and stepped out of the shadow cast by the ...