Shoryu

Prologue A boy stood in front of a giant troll, on a vast mountain top. Snow blew from all sides with fierce winds pushing them. Behind the troll was a ...

I like the idea of the story so far, especially since I don't read many things where a wolf is the main character. But you do need to go over ...

Niteowl - Thanks niteowl I completely missed that and yes it's one woman so I'll go back and fix that. Rickage - Thanks for the tips and I'll fix them ...

I love this, great fanfic is all I can say for now :)

Excellent story, I love it, the way you have it put together just makes it really good. I can't wait till there's more! :D

“Tell me I’m in Love” My dreams almost came true When I first laid my eyes upon you I hate it when we part I’d love to hit re-start Please ...

yeah SCL I've been thinking about taking that line out and changing it, and thanks for the advice.

“Tell me I’m in Love” My dreams almost came true when I first laid my eyes upon you I hate it when we part I’d love to hit re-start please ...

I really enjoyed this poem, I liked the way you had the rhyme scheme and I sorta've had a melody going along in my head as I read it. Please, ...

Hey everyone I'm new here, to the whole writers forum thing and just the whole website. So what's there to do here?