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Re: What is the first word you think of when I say...........
Stick.
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Re: Mad Hatter's Mountain Tavern and Inn
The man watches the girl as she orders, occupied with his own thoughts. "Thanks," he responds to the bartender when he receives the drink and turns his attention back to ...
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Re: Star Wars: If Luke had gone to the Dark side.
Hi, I'm Shooting Stars ! I know I'm a girl and it may be a little weird, but I have always loved Star Wars (I haven't wanted to admit this ...
Jan 8, 2012 -
Re: Hide and Go Seek
" Three, Four, Five, Six... " The numbers fade as I run away from the willow tree the seeker is counting under. I glance behind me at the willows and ...
Jan 8, 2012 -
Re: 317 (Chapter One)
Hiya! Shooting Stars here to review! To be honest, I saw very few mistakes in your story. Great job! :D I really like the opening because it grips you and ...
Jan 8, 2012 -
Re: Mad Hatter's Mountain Tavern and Inn
A tall, hooded man strolls toward the bar at the side of the well lit tavern. He takes a seat on one of tthe stools, observing those around him. He ...
Jan 8, 2012 -
Re: Mad Hatter's Mountain Tavern and Inn
The "Mad Hatter's" is a large tavern that has been around since 1504 b.c. and is literally located on the side of a mountain. The waiters and waitresses here warmly ...
Jan 8, 2012 -
Re: Seer Of Dreams - Chapter One
Hey! I'm Shooting Stars and I guess I'm your reviewer for the day. :D Okay... Here goes. In red is the stuff I changed a little bit. In blue is ...
Jan 8, 2012 -
Re: Eight Years Late
Hi! Shooting Stars here! I have to admit that this poem brought tears to my eyes because of the tenderness and sweetness and the truth to it. :smt022 I really ...
Jan 7, 2012 -
Re: The Brotherhood: Prologue edited
Hey! Shooting Stars here! The assassin was ready for the kill. Right in the very beginning, you gripped me. Usually this isn't my type of book, but you pulled me ...
Jan 7, 2012 -
Re: Secrets Left Unknown (closed/started)
Okay just to let you know, I've never done one of these Story Books so I NEED HELP! AH! Just tell me if I'm doing something terribly wrong. I'm going ...
Jan 7, 2012
