ShootingStars

Hey there, Whitney! This is Shooting Stars :D The beginning caught my attention which is good. I loved that you were writing to your best friend! However, I noticed a ...

Thank you so much for reviewing and like I mentioned before, yeah I was little then. (Well I guess I'm still young now...) Ooh! And what you said about Lord ...

Grey Sanders When Glacies gives me the opportunity to use my lightning bolts, I am all for it. I don't get the chance to use electricity very often so I'm ...

Thrern wonders aloud, "How does it cover your scent?" Getting distracted he eyes a gorgeous young girl who waltzes by and he winks at her. She smiles and waves. Then ...

Oh gosh... I cried! :wink: Nothing more needs to be said. Awesomeness! ---Shooting Stars

Shooting Stars is here to review! :D Okay I really liked reading your poem, but noticed that you began rhyming then suddenly stopped. I don't know if you did this ...

--- Note before you read: I found this poem I wrote three years ago in fourth grade, so it's not the greatest thing in the world but I was only ...

The pen comes crashing down onto my paper in blasts and explosions of black ink. My hand guides the pen as words begin to flow smoothly together, forming sentences. All ...

Grey Sanders Listening to the conversations buzzing around her, Grey feels a sick, sinking feeling bubbling in the pit of her stomach. She attempts to act perky and optimistic when ...

Leaning back in his wooden seat,Thrern closes his eyes. "Wow, Sai," is all he says as he lets it soak in. He reopens his eyes and notices a few more ...

Grey Loraine (Rain) Sanders My hands move back and forth in front of me, sweeping the air. Thick currents of wind gather together, following and obeying each slight movement I ...

"So I know your family is a guardian, but what is it exactly?" Thrern wonders, warming up in his seat by the fire. "Well..." Sai starts hesitantly.

Thrern's smirk returns. "I see. I knew there was something I liked about you. Why don't we go back inside; it's quite chilly out here. I didn't intend on staying ...

Thrern eyes Sai carefully. He nods once, doing a good job of hiding his true emotions. His voice is calm as he reassures the young lady. "Now we both share ...

Thrern's grin widens as he witnesses Sai's giddy reactions. She is practically jumping up and down like a school girl. Then suddenly the dark fabric that was concealing the lower ...