ShootingStars

Hey! This is Shooting Stars here to review! Here's just a few things to think about: 1) When writing, the very first line is the most important. It sucks readers ...

You are banned 'cause I'm wearing a turquoise Aeropostale top, and it's really sparkly!

What do I look like? :shock: ---Shooting Stars

Waiting in the Dark Six year-old Eliza Tuttle reluctantly climbed in her small twin bed, only because her mother lovingly pestered her to do so. "Mommy, I really don't think ...

This pulled me in, but like others have said the giant blocks of text intimidated me and made it difficult to read. Great job though! Keep writing! ---Shooting Stars

You're banned because I'm watching Lord of the Rings right now, and you're most likely not!

I ban you for thinking I was swooning! :D Was not... Okay, maybe a little but he IS cute.

Haha oh well. :D

October 24 BEST DAY EVA!!!

I ban you for being a hypocrite because you just did it also.

Laughing Cat! (so creative, I know)

Banned for incorrectly using the word "weather" so HA!

(Oops I spelled "fleece" incorrectly... Sorry :D)

What do you say?

Grey Sanders "He's kind of an arch angel..." Renn hesitantly tells everyone. I can't believe he's part angel! I mean with everything else weird going on, this is only something ...