ShootingStars

Who isn't the best at...?

shooting Stars is back for a review! Wonderful job on this chapter! I honestly didn't find many mistAkes, except for what I mentioned on the last chapter about the commas ...

Just finished, UpandOut! Any other reviews?

Hi, UpandOut! This is ShootingStars as requested here to review. :D First of all, I really like your descriptions and the way you put in the flashback when he's talking. ...

*EDIT, EDIT, EDIT* *Review, submit, DONE* Finished, Rascalover and Devan! Next, please! Stack those requests up. :D ---Shooting Stars

Hey, this is Shooting Stars here to review like asked! First of all, your opening line is AMAZING. It's short and sweet, but gets to the point and really makes ...

Done, Rascallover! I'm on it, DevinEWilliams!

Hi, this is Shooting Stars like you requested! :D In the first few sentences, you grabbed me which is important so good job! I love your writing style but felt ...

No, I prefer warm weather. TUBM had at one point a pet rock. (Mine was named Billy Bob Joe!!!)

Fortunately he gave me a slice of chocolate pie... Yum.

Listening to Rebecca Black!

And out pops an arrow on FIRE! *inserts a bowl of marshmallow pudding* ?

What is the coolest...?

AHHH! SCARY! Yeah...

Banned because I forgive it.