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To censor me would be to mummify the metaphors and similes as they crawled to life on my tongue. This soul shattering act occurs Whenever I drink from the gene ...

That's very impressive. I like this portion the best: White lights glaring, An angel sings, Looks so caring, A loud noise rings, Flames and fire, Trapped in hell, Feelings so ...

I like this. It's very sweet. I also like the way that you use colors to describe her vivid dreams. I just have two suggestions. I would add some more ...

Love Like/As A Punk. I’m an Addict for you, like Bad Religons. Loving your Casualties. Because you make me feel so Exploited. You make me feel like a Misfit among ...

I love this, it's simple and to the point, which goes along with the image of a simple mask very well. You perfectly married that image and this poem together. ...

That was interesting to say the least. I respect how you test the restraints of poetry to form a piece like this, kudos for that. I usually don't like poems ...

That was awesome, a poem for poet's. I'm not sure why, but it made me think of Todd Alcott's Television. Not sure if that's what you were going for, but ...

That completely knocked my socks off! You held my attention the entire time, it was intelligent and lighthearted, and the images it throws at you work all of the senses! ...

I love this poem, especially the second stanza. The imagery in that stanza and the first are amazing. I would just suggest combining the last two stanza's in some way, ...

Hi. I really like your poem. I just have two small suggestions, you use the words eerie, fog, and oblivion a lot in them. I try to refrain from doing ...

To censor me would be to mummify the metaphors and similes as they crawled to life on my tongue. This soul-shattering act occurs whenever I drink from my gene pool. ...