Shizzley

This poem is simply very soothing, it touches on a beautiful subject and really does set your mind at peace so well done with it. Now, onto the nit-picks! If ...

This is a really interesting and unique story which I really enjoyed reading as you used your imagination really well when creating characters out of body parts and stories to ...

I do actually love this poem. It's beautifully simple and I haven't read a book of this subject before so you did well in writing it. Now, on to the ...

This is a really moving poem with emotion and heart. You used interesting and descriptive language and the metaphors you used really set a scene in your head. I like ...

Thank you for reviewing this!! :) I will go over it when I get more time and add more details in. You can also watch the animation clip on YouTube, ...

Wow! This is an amazing piece filled with emotion and metaphorical images. My only complaint is that you don't vary your punctuation enough. Try using a semi-clom is some lines, ...

This poem is based on the short animation film, The Piano When I play the piano, I am next to my wife. When the free music flows, I relive my ...

Hello and welcome to YWS, I'm kind of new myself so I will try to review as best as I possibly can, but, I warn you, I can be harsh. ...

This is really clever and I could relate to it really well seeing as I always used to be scared that there was something hiding in my wardrobe! Although, because ...

This poem showed emotion through the varity of techniques ehich you used such as onomatopoeia, rhyme, and a regular beat and pattern. Although it could be a bit longer as ...

Chapter 1 The names on the boxes flashed beside me as I shuffled along the corridor. Names which belonged to people. People who were inside these boxes. Like I was ...

Wow! This is quite amazing! You're choice of words are old-fashioned however the story has a modern twist to it. I really loved it and it increased my vocabulary as ...

Hi and wow, I really like these lyrics, they conveyed a lot of emothion through the words however there were a few little mistakes which I noticed. What a shame ...

Hearing the screams of the dying, the living calling to their friends, and every sound in between. The vampire massacre was horrible .The government could not stop the beasts. So ...

I really enjoyed this poem, it was simple, funny and brought a smile on my face. It was really uplifting and happy when it sometimes seems that everything around you ...