Shireling

smaur, could you add some new links? None of the links to the examples work anymore, at least not for me. I get the old, 403 Forbidden You don't have ...

And if you all don't know, the last part of the Ink Trilogy is going to be InkDeath. :) Happy reading! Thanks for the tip Monki, I actually found that ...

I have to say that I agree with about how good Cornelia Funke's books are. I especially liked Inkheart because of all the references to books in the book, also ...

Li Dies???? Arrrghh! I liked that little guy. I still can't figure out Bird yet either and it's bugging me, he's weird , definitely not like any villain I've read ...

Wow, cool chapter. I thought Kit was great, I especially liked this passage. Whistle, crack . As the tingling numbness hit me again, I remembered the word I had been ...

(trying to link all of this together) When Deev had cleaned up his face he surveyed the damage in a mirror. It wasn’t that bad, unlike his ship. As he ...

Terribly sorry about the long delay in finishing my review for this. Review of Chapter 3 I haven't found anything major, just some occasional typos. "What?" Li squinted. Wiggins and ...

I saw your link to this poem in your signature and figured that I should check out a fellow Ringer's work. I'm know very little about poetry so I just ...

Chapter 3 In a darkened basement room, a row of computer monitors lit up a cluttered desk with dim blue glow. Fifteen-year old Max Dexter hunched over the desk gripping ...

More Chair in the making? Yesss! I've been needing another Shan fix for awhile. The changes you made in the first chapter are good, although I still think that 'pednulum' ...

Chapter Two Two men guarding the gate, three watchtowers, a few tents, a rundown house, a jeep, and a truck armed and armored with a heavy caliber machine gun and ...

Future Soldier Major Dirk Douglas of the U.S. Marines sat stiffly on a hard bench in the belly of military transport plane. He steadfastly watched a fire extinguisher on the ...

I agree with Gyr, Lester Bird is fine so far, just make sure that he doesn't drift into the whole 'I am an evil bad guy and I like it' ...

As long as you don't start up another crime syndicate like the Cabassis' I don't mind how many birds from the gyrfalcon nest are here. I've got a brother on ...

I finally got around to crit this sorry if it seemed like a long time. Ok the major problem here is the part where Leah and the F.B.I take cover ...