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I hjyusatt ttteruid too qwrtite mmmty nasme ttttttghat issssssd wsqahysanui. I just tried to write my name that is sayani. :lol:

Yep!There are too much grammatical and spelling errors,so.....better revise it.

*shout*WHAT.................oh no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What would u say if u knew that Tom Cruise is your brother?

I would love to here this sung by anyone :lol: I liked the first stanza.Good job :) .And yeah u can post more songs. -sayani :wink:

First of all Welcome to yws! :) Your poem is a good work.But as shimmer says there is no need of commas after each sentence.Keep up the good work.And keep ...

Hi JC!I am Sayani from India. :) Welcome to yws. Hey even if ur crazy it doesn't matter, cuz yws people loves crazy ones. :lol: If ur from Texsas then ...

This is a short composition, which I wrote when I was asked by my teacher to begin a composition with “There was darkness all around. I walked ahead two steps ...

Umm..ok here is the new word onerask-confused between onerous task.

Creativity is something which is made of your own is something which comes out from is one of the greatest thing which I think everyone has it. :)

Having a tattoo is pretty cool 8) I voted for the first one.

Good job! The poem has feelings in it. :)

A touchy poem with lots of emotions.Liked it very much. :) Good work!

Good job! This is a marvellous piece of work and I liked it.Keep writing :)

Good job! :) Only the second sentence, of the second para is not making much sence.

That is superb,but a colored one will rock.