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Hi Kairii! Welcome to YWS! As a new comer I would say you that a good place to start out here is the FAQ. It has lots of helpful information. ...

I simply loved the idea.Very well too no crit to give because its good the way it is.Even you worked out nicely with the rythm. Keep it up! ~Shine~

As Monki pointed out I felt that "o-o-o-o" parts were not necessary.And that its too short to be a lyrical one.But if I forget about it being a lyric and ...

Puntuations?that would have made the poem more good to read. I too felt that there is a hidden sweet feeling in this. I only wish that you had made the ...

Is Innocent! :P

As I recieved a positive response on this poem,I got it printed in my school magazine.hehe...:)

Welcome welcome welcome!!!! This place is the best.Believe me.(as I am a nice person :P) See you around then. Have fun! ~Sayani~

Thats really a marvallous picture!

The picture which did catch my attention was the cat one. The other one which was good was the fourth one I liked the tall legged shadow in it.

I will call that a smart background.I liked it.

Those are just like the perfect shots.Couldn't have been better! My Favourites were actually all but still I think the "3.Pose in Pink" and search of sweetness" are a bit ...

A poem does not matter on its length,the thing which only matters is if you had let the full meaning out in the poem. the begining I felt was a ...

Welcome Conrad Rice!

Thats seriously awesome! The pictures truly defines the true colours of nature.We don't really get to see this rich form of colors.....I liked it.:) And I felt that the gloden ...

Hi Pi!!!:) Welcome to YWS! And definately your crits are helpful. see you around. ~Shine~