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Hello ,Welcome to yws. Have fun!

Totally weird...

Anti-Flag rocks!

Yeah it should be illegal

small and preety good. :)

Definately u did...

Yeah!Pat Buchanan. Nate's poll just "ROCKS"

Hey Welcome to YWS. :) This piece of work was good. After all of the girls were cleaned up, two men came around tossing them there daily ration of bread, ...

Definitely a well thought of a funny story, Then the man stepped over the Mayor and took his place in front of the podium. The man's name was Tony, but ...

Well done! It definitely sounds good. This was good with some errors like: Take me home Mother, take me home I would have preferred the comma after the first lines ...

Hey a long poem written by B'journ! Pretty good.Actually I read it in a hurry and didn't get much to critic on,hehehe... So I'll come on later and critic on ...

Preety good. It does show ur inner feelings. Worked well but I didn't like the reapitation of the last line three times,I know it does emphasis but still didn't sound ...

Mr.Frontry is back!

Hey Lozareth! Welcome back to Yws. Enjoy!

Hey Kardas! Welcome to YWS! Keep posting ur stuffs here. Enjoy! :)