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Re: Never
Never in a million years, Could I regain your trust. Never in a single day, Could I do the things I must. Never in a legacy, Could I take back ...
Sep 4, 2006 -
Re: Worlds
That was really good.
Sep 4, 2006 -
Re: Memories of Summer
huh!
Sep 4, 2006 -
Re: To God
Starting was a bit sudden and confusing. Body was fine.But the starting makes the whole piece confusing. Keep writing.:)
Sep 4, 2006 -
Re: Hallway
It was nice reading it, but something does lack in this poem but I don't know what it really is. Keep writing.:)
Sep 4, 2006 -
Re: Heaven Isn't Everything
This was beautifully written. Well done!
Sep 4, 2006 -
Re: Forever Isn't Long Enough
That was preety good,Well done. Keep writing.:)
Sep 4, 2006 -
Re: Library or Book Store?
Buy books from the store cuz I always want the books which I read to be with me forever,and I don't know why I want that...:)
Sep 2, 2006 -
Re: YWS sleeping?
Jack says:I've been away -- that's clearly the reason Not really Firestarter,u see as I was away as my exams are going on thats why.hehehe... :) Don't worry people Yws ...
Sep 2, 2006 -
Re: Celebrity Sex Symbol (R)
Ah! that was good,keep writing. :)
Sep 2, 2006 -
Re: The Rhythm of Dark Encroaching
This was really good. my favorite line would be: Your friends surround you and this is it: your life only stretches as far as the night. a spelling error that’s: ...
Aug 21, 2006 -
Re: Search Google Within YWS
Totally!
Aug 21, 2006 -
Re: Lots Of Names Deleted: DO NOT PANIC
Hey who is this Anonymous person. This person has viewed everyones profile so many times.
Aug 21, 2006 -
Re: Unending Ends
Hey this was really good; the flow of the poem was good. My points of view: There is no end to something that had no beginning-- no foreseeable conclusion for ...
Aug 21, 2006 -
Re: Bjorn: An Inside Look
So 'j' is silent,so its B'orn,cool. 8)
Aug 21, 2006