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I like the girls hand reaching out,but theres something odd about the face. The second pic is good and I like the flame.

I think its ur voice,ur characters and actually everything.Everyone has his or her unique way of plotting the story.They have their own style.

interesting!Well done.

Emm... ending was not very clear to me,the poem has emotions and feelings into it. Well done!

Well translating your experience to a poem was definately a praisable idea. I like the rythem of the poem,and it was a bit funny ofcourse. Liked it,Keep writing.

Hmm...another good piece of work. I hardly have anything in ur poem to criticize about. They(ur poems) are wonderful. Good job.

I think this was fantastic, also the rhyming worked well. Well done! Would like to see more of ur works. And also Welcome to Yws.

That was good but as u know it needs a bit of work on it. Keep writing!

Well written...

This Remix is definately good. With lots of emotions and feelings it worked well.

Yeah definately good.

Hey Amanda even i like ur name. I am Ani,actually my real name is Sayani. Nice to meet u.

Ah this was fantastic,Well done!

Yeah totally the title is something... And it seems all the girls got curious about it.Anyway Hey Lufgif! Welcome to YWS. Have fun!:)

Pretty good,would have liked to see more of it. The second paragraph was a bit unexplainable,and confusing. Keep writing.