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First of all the work is kind of perfect to be in the lyrics. Things I liked: 1.The rythm worked really too nicely,I'm not that good like you seriously at ...

Simple Good! The things I liked: 1.The writing style. 2.The comparison silver ware-love. 3.Simplicity of the whole piece. 4.Dramatic ending. The only difference: silver wears off you in minutes. These

Kairii this was really good!I mean there is so much emotion and feeling into it doubt its under "emo rock".The message in it is perfect.The only crit is that in ...

The lyric was a good attempt. The part I liked more is the chorus part. Ohh… they didn’t know what they were doing, He lost control and crashed into that ...

Nice shot Mayfyre,but I feel there isn't anything unique about it.May be next time you get something really interesting do post it here.i wish the focus of the camera was ...

Thats a nice story much like reality to me because believe me I have been seeing something similar in school.Perhapoa I know the ending,hehe,just kidding.Hey its your story and I ...

A nice plot again,the story is indeed interesting. Waiting for the next one.

You were good at writing this. Looking forward to the next chapter. So keep posting!

Thats a story which you generally get to see in school among the teens,it is ofcourse interesting to read. Even me want to know when is the next coming up?Actually ...

That is a nicely explained and a great story.I don't think so that you need to make it more short,as making it short would mean missing out small things.There is ...

Hey Jenni,I guess your Algebra exam was hilarious!:) About the poem first thing I would say why you being so much bothered about the length? Are you running out of ...

Hi Savannah! Welcome to the site. So what are your interests in ? See you around. ~Shine~

Three cheers for Pat,Hip hip hurray!

I think Physics is Fun! For me Physics=Logic=Interesting.

Drawing 1:Thats I think is cool.The detailing has been done nicely. Drawing 2:The outfit is perfect.I wish the head of the weapon had some definite shape or a structure signifying ...