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Hey L-- welcome to the site! I am Ani . And actually lot of people read ur welcome thing so everyone in this site cares for the newbies. And even ...

Sabradan wrote:Personally, I'd rather he be tortured to near-death, then gassed and shot, like he did to many thousands of his own people, but I'll settle for this. This one'll ...

Hey thanks! And welcome to the site.

Hey Devon! Welcome! I am Sayani Bet u will love this place.

I too prefer hand written,for me its more easier and more faster than to type on the computer.

u definately need to work on puntuations. The whole poem is without a single puntuation!

First of all welcome to the site! whatever i would have liked to see a better title. To talk about the poem starting is nice. Though more puntuations in the ...

That was no doubt an interesting poem to write on death. I am just death. I think it would have done without the word 'just'. What is not mine. I ...

Hey Tom. Yep it was fun readind it. Keep up the good work.

Its fun!

I can see my friend Sohini's and mine house,two dots to the east of India.

That was a reallly good feeling of the love between a child and her/his mother. I liked the metaphor u used in the second para. But i didn't get it ...

Hey welcome to u both. Hello David Hello Tom. Enjoy!

no doubt it was refreshing...

This definately didn't look like a poetry. I know it has meanings and thoughts into it.The writing is good, May be u should have posted it under something else.