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8.5/10,mike mike so much to read and its confusing me,but the background colors are good.

well that was pretty cool,that is all i can say.

Yeah ofcourse thats ur opinion. sorry if u feel i was rude.

Clouds by Percy Bysshe Shelley.

I disagree, Rhyme is not essential in poetry and Im beginning to prefer non-rhyming poetry as the poet concentrates on theme more as oposed to getting it to rhyme. I ...

It was a nice try. 3 ***

Your first effort was a good try. Try using some rhyming words.Try to put some rythme into ur makes ur poem sound good. I liked the way the poem ended. ...

They say that they will help you When you shall be in need, They say that they will aid you, If you just ask, if you just call. You smile, ...

These are really unique. Would really like to see more.

This should go under the forum 'Other'. Try it over there. :)

I enjoy video games. Actully I love video games. It's the only time I feel like I'm in control. I'm a world peace advocate(Check the Sig) Haven't made much headway ...

No doubt the poem was random.OMG!Look the spider is on ur head. Your siggy:My fav is not Batista,i like John Cena.I've a friend who likes Batista.

Hey Britt!(ok i didn't yet get a new name for u but soon i'll). Welcome to YWS. Glad that u are liking this place,(well everyone actually does). I am Ani ...

Thanks Adam! That was really helpful,I'll try to redo it. And yeah I got it were exactly the problem is.

yeah may be i do.