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The potrait is amazing. In second one I liked the drop of cocacola.I mean the earth in it. Cass wrote:I'm thinking it's colored pencil, but I'm so bad at guessing ...

Hi Pip! Welcome to YWS! Just a quick reminder! Read the rules and follow the two critiques to one submission rule. For any help let pm me or anyone here,they ...

Hi Fael! Welcome to the site! And also wish u a 'Happy New Year!' Just a quick reminder! Read the rules and follow the two critiques to one submission rule. ...

Hello Mia! Welcome to the site! And also a Happy New Year! :) Just a quick reminder! Read the rules and follow the two critiques to one submission rule. For ...

Phorcys wrote:Then you review it before posting. Simple. No excuses please lol Ooo... we really have a strict teacher here,lol. :wink:

Good try!Work on it and you will get the best out of it.

These pictures are really nice.I think my favourite one is the third one.

*has already packed her bag* ;)

You have a large vocabulary for a seven year old. Griff thats his posts number,he is 13yrs old. So I am saying that You(Arclight) have a large vocabulary for a ...

avoid the scribble thing.

Another of your short good poem! :P I liked the way it started. Just one small thing, that in this para: That's for you do decide. To believe in what ...

Hi Sylverdawn! Thats a nice name. Welcome to YWS! Just a quick reminder! Read the rules and follow the two critiques to one submission rule. For any help let pm ...

Granted but in place of taht stuffy nose a mouth u have two mouths now so congrats!lol I wish all guys were good as most of them are.;)

Alright then!

Hello Kyle! Welcome to the site. Keep writing and posting it in here. We would love to read your work. And as Grif said if needed help ask me or ...