Shine

Thats really nice. I like the shiny ice in the third one. The second and the last are the best.

Hi Gigi! Welcome to the site! and its not necesary that you have to show your age in your profile. And another thing is I would suggest you to put ...

Hi Ralph! :) Welcome to the site! would like to see your work. If need any help let me know by pm. see you around. :wink:

Hi Mousey! Welcome to the site! I hope u liked niteowl's gift.lol see you around.;) ~Ani~

Granted but u have to watch it in mute state. I wish i didn't make someone sad.

Am I known to anyone? lol

All I can say is keep working on this,you can make it a lot better. The story you seem to write is of a good idea so do complete it ...

I pretty much liked it.I liked the topic on which the song was based on and you were clear and specific to the reader how the song is going to ...

ok...probably the first girl to read it.lol It was pretty good and as Chairman suggested you do need to put some more adjectives,it will make it more interesting and good.

9/10,liked it.

Hi Thoko! Welcome to the cool site! I'm Ani,and pm me for any help. see u around!

granted but you swallowed your shoe. I wish i had a cat.

Granted you are so tall now(even taller than Mt.Rushmore) that your head poke of the earth. I wish i had that ava of Sohini.

Granted but you will run cross million states this year. I wish i was not so tired.

A kid sat on the steps thinking He sat and sat wondering what to do When he saw a light blinking Now he knew, what to do the first thing ...