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hmm...pretty interesting uptil now.

Thats really nice,but the river should have some blue water and i wish the boys lips weren't so black.Also adding some more greenary(grass) at the sides would make it more ...

Hi there Amanda! Gosh you had to bear a lot of pain i guess for the past many days.Silly doctors! Get well soon! would like to read Sweeter With Time. ...

Hey Armadian ! Welcome back! We didn't really meet before but that doesn't really matter I suppose.:P

Hello all! Allow me to introduce myself. Name: Kezria Age: 16 School: Homeschooled Favorite genre of fiction: Fantasy Hey there! Welcome to Yws! Would like to read your work. heyy ...

Thats great!u don't neccesarily have to change it.:)

LOL,somehow our names also do match: Prince of Charon and mine is Princess katz :wink: so r we........??????? :P

We all will miss you,take care and Good luck!

Granted,you become colour blind. i wish i could have a long sleep.

8/10 something unique.

Granted, now your head is down and your legs are up,your right hand is at left amd the left hand at right.And ofcourse the balls with which you play are ...

hey dude! Welcome to teh site! Is that u in the picture?

Granted but after u get the book which u had carelessly picked up from the shop in excitement,u realize that that wasn't the book u wanted to have,so you ask ...

This I would say was nice,though I don't really have a clear idea of free verse. But In the begining it sounded a bit vague.May be adding something more to ...

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