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hehee...ya poetry is weird!

I agree to Mad. I think you had a really nice idea about this poem,but it would be better if you expand it,it doesn't have to be short.Your poem consists ...

Yea Welcome back superman!Oh I mean Aeroman!!:D

The picture is beautiful. I think you need to fix the shading on her cheeks. I would have likes to see teh whoel body. Well done!

Thats a clean and pretty job. Liked it a lot.:D

Very cool indeed.

WOW thats lovely! I like the blood drops....on the rose....and nice shading.:D waiting for the scanned one.

I adore the last one too;) nice sketches.

I like the background....and the glowing hands...the colors are cool too.... and yes she is kinda too tall .... but yes she is evil:D keep posting ur other drawings....

Welcome to the site!! see u aroung.... Keep posting and writing! have fun!

Hi Anthaslunula! Welcome to yws..... and you will be writing soon again....good luck for that. Have fun! see u around...:D

Hey I would love to see purple stars....:D

Hi Claire. Welcome to yws. Have fun!

Though this poem wasn't a master piece but it was so touchy, and it definately showed how much you love ur grandma. Try using some synonyms of love... Keep writing ...

Hey this is nice.......well done!!