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I would love to see it colored......but its cute !!:D

The last one is just so unique...very arty indeed. Also the pic of the flower is awesome....loving it... Keep up the good work Harley ! wanna see more of it....:)

hehehe....truly Literary Landfill !!

The black and white pictures are arty......I liked the pic wid that key in the door.....nice one! And the cat really personifies...hehehe... Interesting pics!!

Yea truly I wanna have a ride in that....:D can I Adam?(even if you say no....i will haha!)

Finally you are posting your truly colorful pictures..:D Well done mate!!

Hey thats a sweet pic.....and the effects and the quote is good.;)

Hey SASSYLADY333!!! welcome to the site!! would like to see your work, see you around;)

Wrong place to post this....

That was nice...I felt the first stanza was short and simple,and the second stanza was pretty vague compared to the first one. I would have liked to expand it more,but ...

I think you had something in your mind while writing this,and based on that you wrote this piece.And you didn't give a clue to the reader what are you talking ...

I think this was just totally different sought of poem.Pretty interesting. In short u tried to express a lot ,and it worked out perfectly.the idea was fabulous. Keep it up ...

I think that was had that flow and the ending was nice. But the observations in the poem were pretty hapazard,and also the rhymining was way better and at the ...

Hi SishBee , Welcome to yws! Do post ur work,would like to raed them. see u around :)

I would have liked some rythm into this poem,like ryhming and all that,but then again the poem was good so that can be spared. Well done! It was good indeed. ...