Shine

Yeah if you improve thsi a little more I guess it will be a nice poem dear.

You have done a great lot of detailing,its just perfecto! The colors you chose were nice, the shading you did was good.And I like the eye. You are too good ...

You brought out the character pretty well in the picture,nice! And yeah the outfit is nice.:)

Hey James!! Welcome to the Young writers society!! We will be glad to review your works. see you around buddy. ~Shine~;)

Hey xyberangel!! Welcome to YWS!! see you around.;)

First of all I would like some punctuations in this poem.Don'rt forget to punctuate them. Frankly saying the starting was a bit abstract for me. I would say the poem ...

Hey HeartsUnspoken!! That was just very lyrical indeed I would say,I kind of liked it. The flow of the poem was good. You have done a good work on lyrics. ...

Hmmmmm.... impressive indeed.Keep up the good work!!

Welcome to YWS Reakeda!! got any questions then pm, me I would try my best to help. see ya!! ~Shine~

Hi Sarah! Welcome to YWS! Hope to see you around.

Wow thats just awesome,with the background its just seriously wow!!

Kool! I never actually realised our school place is so beautiful.Wonderful snaps!! :wink:

I'm thinking of changing it to Shine,thats what mine school friends call me lolzzz....

Hey Jackie! Welcome to the site. Tell you what YWS loves crazy and unpredictable people. glad to have you here, see yo uaround.;) ~Ani~

Hey Kate!! Welome to YWS. This is just the perfect place for you and we are glad to have you here.If got any questions to ask then pm me i ...