Shia225

Good poem, expresses feelings most of us are too afraid to. The voice is very good, since almost no one uses slang, making it unique. 5/5

Ugh, middle school was tough. On first period, I learned I had the exact classes as Alex, the guy I liked. It was kinda depressing (I blush when I see ...

How sad... I'm a marshmallow when it comes to dramatic and sad things like this. But, it definitely rings a bell. I like the use of words, like "float", because ...

This was good, a little less descriptive than I expected, but still good. The teen sounds like a smart kid, that implies -to me- that she is against tobacco. I ...

Blerg, I hate writers' block, too. But that certainly made my soul laugh. You should make that into a poem, it would get a little more attention. This is the ...

I think this was a good essay, but you missed a big one. 'Mankind' or 'man-made' is also symbolizing it. Plus, on 'How Its Made', a T.V. show on the ...

The limit in Haiku's are seventeen syllables; that was arond fourty-eight. A little sad, for me. I don't see a main topic; it talks about essays, eagles, tides, and mountains. ...

Fade it a little, then add more colour. Color splash is my favorite type of photo. Is this original? If it was just found on Photobucket, that wouldn't be fair. ...

sorry if it isn't great, first poem.

Can you love? Hold a dove? Promise not to shove? Can you be quiet, or avoid a big riot? What about sharing? Or caring? Or being really daring? Can you ...

it was deep. I hate to ruin the deep feeling, but how can you write this poem if you are dead??

Yeah, we need to fix earth if we want to survive.

... that was long... good description.

...whoa... very deep, and sad.

That was so deep it hurt my head.