ShelraofWaral

Hye Lava! Its my first attempt to write a fiction story. Would you please review it? I would like to know in what aspects of writing I need to improve ...

Unconsciousness

Its my first ever piece of writing, after 3 weeks of proscarination I have finally laid down my gushing thoughts on paper, ;) --------------------------------------------------------------------------

Answer: To get a break from the real world.

Plates

I must say its a totally gripping, touching, heartfelt story. I enjoyed each and every line. But, the only bug I could find was the repetition of certain actions. Of ...

It is a very good piece of writing. But, it leaves open questions regarding the quest of the main character. I couldn't find any faults in grammar and spelling, You ...

I love the theme that you have set for this story. Re-editing your text will help improve your piece. Keep up the good work, xD

I never bothered myself to read Twilight. Even though the plot is quite modern, but still I never liked Twilight. But, your remake is really funny! And I will defiantely ...

Great Job! The story was very much engrossing. I think to make it more effective, you should vividly describe the feelings of your characters as well as the background in ...

You know you are a writer when you have begun to look life objectively.

"No force in the world can change the mind of young, zestful man named Clark. His mother is begging for mercy, crying bitterly at his feet. His step dad looks ...

My boring summer vacations have started. I guess I will join so I can evade my boredom, and get myself involved in worthwhile pursuit. I am very excited as I ...

He is lying there by the rock since morning. I have tried to make him eat something,but he shook his head away. Maybe he wants to play with me. This ...

The mutated bodies and gene transplant technique have to some extent ruled the science fiction stories. But, your plot is very unique. So I give it 8/10. I think monster ...