Sheik

Hey! I really like this chapter! :lol: You're keeping everything well balanced and the style is very consistent in this chapter as well! :P Vick seems cool and I wanna ...

Here's a link for stuff on the Persian invasion- Here's a Google Book that might be helpful- Here's Herodotus' book online- ^Highly recommended that you read/take a look at, it. ...

Ooo! Do I detect jealousy or concern on Ann's part? :P Mr. Sheldon's a creep, a creep from New York, which makes it more creepy. :lol: Really good chapter, I ...

I really, really, really like James! :lol: Not in an awkward way. . . . .:D He reminds me of my favorite (and only) older brother. :P I also like ...

Whoa. :lol: Excellatte chapter! You are doing such a wonderful job with Mr. Sheldon that he is beginning to remind me of a creep that used to stalk one of ...

I personally like ‘Signs’ better. Heh, I love that movie. :lol: Hm, interesting, so Vick has a weird past too! :D This is turning out to be very, very cool. ...

You know you're a writer when you suddenly become inspired because of the lovely weather and you decide to write all day instead of helping with the Saturday chores. . ...

You have done a very, very, very good job with the flashbacks. :) They are not too much and yet, not too little. You are balancing the present and past ...

Haha! She dug her own grave! :lol: I think Vick is really cool and I'm certain they're going to get along just fine. I love how Mr. Sheldon is haunting ...

Whoa, I feel the tension building here. :lol: Again, he's creepy, but appealing. I love it. :P I also like how the best friend is like "creep!" when he's looking ...

Ooo, a flashback! :lol: I really liked how you're making Wil-pardon me, Mr. Sheldon creepy but appealing at the same time. It's almost as if you're making the reader debate ...

You know you're a writer when you start acting out intense scenes between your characters in your room late at night.

Yo! I just joined today (the whole forum :oops:), but yeah, I love writing with other peoples! PM me if you wanna write with me! :lol: I write Fantasy mostly, ...

Images of him crashing through the door, taking my arms in a grip that was painful, forcefully kissing me as he once had, sweeps through my head. Shouldn't 'sweeps' be ...

We were allowed outside for lunch every day, seeing as the cafeteria was always being used as a gym. Really good sentence, but the 'seeing' doesn't appeal to me and ...