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Re: Concentrate.
Just a little poem that came to mind as I watched The Boy in Striped Pajamas. (: Thinking about extending it if anyone thinks it's any good so far. :P ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Gluttony (Finished, finally)
Well I'm glad it gets the message across xD lmao, cheers. :P x
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Gluttony (Finished, finally)
Cheers Gleek456 :D x Yes Jennya, that up there is already done in chocolate. I've finished it now and have painted the children in coffee, tea and spices. :P I ...
Jul 9, 2011 -
Re: Twisted Beginings
Ahh XD! Okay, thanks a lot. :D (will correct crumbs right away xP)
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: Gluttony (Finished, finally)
Thanks for the review and great advice. I've had a few people tell me that they hadn't realized that it was an obese man until I'd told them, so I'll ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: Twisted Beginings
Twisted Beginings Prologue Chris Winding her wonderful hair with care and precision behind her head, blue eyes gazing ahead through the small window, the sunset right ahead seen from our ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: Gluttony (Finished, finally)
For college I've had to do a project on the seven deadly sins xD This is the start of my final piece and I was wondering what you thought so ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: Prologue
Thank you for your review, I'll take it all into account. (:
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Prologue
Thanks Thechocolatewritingcat..xD I think I understand what you mean about where I've placed the words, (No typo, I meant shouting guns, I was trying out some personification because you wouldn't ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: Prologue
[Rip it apart. Be as harsh as you like) Limp, lifeless, lonely, the muddy green material specked with dirt, debris and crimson. A mystery, lying in the dark, damp dirt; ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: Fire and Ice
I can see what you're doing here, and I like the idea. Although, even though it is a prologue and I know they are supposed to be short, I in ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: all these tangled thorns
I think it's amazing, I love your beautiful way of using your words! Although I agree with a few people's criticisms, but other than a few things. I liked the ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: The True Story of Jack and Jill
This made me smile. xD
Aug 29, 2010 -
Re: The Moon Elves
Wowwiie, I really like these and I love the emotion on their faces and the writing in the backround is cool. Is it just me or is the elf woman's ...
Aug 29, 2010 -
Re: The End of Fire
Name: Natalie "Nat" Lowe Age: 18 Gender: Female Appearance: Standing at 5 foot 3, she isn't the tallest of girls, considering her age (though people always mistake her for being ...
Mar 10, 2010
