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Re: An Ode to Squirrels
Very original. I like the accent. But shouldn't "mary" in the third stanza be "marry?" Maybe I'm wrong--anyway, I like this. It's funny.
Aug 8, 2006 -
Re: A Matter of Endearments
The syntax is beautiful, and there is a lot of metaphoric imagery that makes this poem interesting. I like it.
Aug 8, 2006