SharonPie01

This chapter is quite long, hope you guys don't mind. I also hope it was better than the first chapter(where there were A LOT of errors!) Thanks for reading :smt001 ...

If I could keep you by my side, If I could feel your lips on mine, If I could only bring you back to life. You would say it is ...

Thanks for advice ziggyfred I will keep this in mind+

Okay,It was good,but I suggest you change it around a little bit. 10:00 AM, Saturday radio: Now we're gonna play a special request from one of our listeners: Attention by ...

If I'm correct in guessing what this is based on, then it's good. It is based on The twilight saga I think. As far as vampire stories go, this could ...

I dropped the body on the ground with a thud.The man I just drank from rolled on and into the river. I didn't look back but climbed up on the ...

Hm,there are,as people say,errors but I love it is good and the point god aswell.I love how you discribe the girl.Good job!

This is more like a is too long for a poem in my opinion.But the context is good.I don't get the point though...

This is a joke right?Sorry for being unpolite, but it isn't a good poem. How did it turn out to be one big sentence without a full stop?Where did the ...

Um,yeah.Okay,I'm going to try to not be a sob.The poem was really chopped up and short. where two walls meet and greet It sounds a little cheesy and out of ...

It is really good.I like it.There are some thing to it. staring at into the night. In my opinion it would be better as "Staring into the night" I don't ...

I don't have anything I don't like in this poem honestly!

Good one.I get the point of it. There is a few to it though. a girl from toronto was asleep in her bed she was completely asleep from her toes ...

I lik all of them.I think the jumping kid one is quite funny.

I love the details.I think it is a great 3D project.