Shakyll

This is really good!! I think you might have spelled "chivalry" wrong though...but I really like it. i love the first verse. a lot. It's good. You should really try ...

really good. I love his edgy attitude, and how you describe him as being "I, as a hormonal teenager, want to curl into a ball and start crying at the ...

I like it :) I love the part about the shepherd's love in the end. So glad to meet a fellow God lover on here x)

I love it. I've never met such a prim, tea-loving, sophisticated, peace-loving dragon before. Very well done. But, as Cailey said, you should probably keep the spacing all at one ...

thank you guys :] I'll work on the characters and try to slow the rushed feeling. muchas gracias for taking the time xD

um, it's awesome. I like the sarcasm in the first paragraph x) there are typos though and I had some confusion over this paragraph: "My feet became ice cold and ...

excellent. I love love love the first paragraph about what each of them are going to do x) The dialogue is witty and fast-paced and the tension in the end ...

This, is really good. It's fast-paced and edgy, easy to follow. There are a few typos and grammatical errors and maybe some room for expounding on details. But I really ...

I stepped onto the scale and held my breath as the hateful little needle spun around. Maybe it would slow down and stop on the 100. Slow down, stop, go ...

Ash: Thanks for your critique :D Yes, fear-scent is the scent of fear, because horses can sense emotions like that. The fear scent is his companions' fear and also his ...

hmm...i love it. :D But I do agree with Tayla, about the line of generals barking orders. Might want to edit a little. But I love it!!! America definitely deserves ...

OHMYWORD. I like it. :] My favorite part would be "The darkness has been burnt by light The beast will never win" But, maybe you could use a different word ...

I really like this. It's a gritty realism which a lot of girls are familiar with. Thanks. :)

Anorexia's no bueno...if you have the slightest suspicion, you should get help. I'm not saying you have to get into a support group right now, just talk to your doctor ...

Really, really interesting. The type of story that you read over and over again because there's so much depth and intricate wording. I like how we aren't told everything, but ...