Shakyll

Is this a true story? Because you captured the feeling flawlessly. I love the prince and white stallion reference. And the king of affection and charm...it's champion. Maybe you could ...

I love it! It's really interesting ^^ it raises a lot of questions and suspense. I love how she said that there was a spelling mistake in the essay xD ...

as for review, just tell it like it is! talk about what you like and what you don't like, just be constructive. you can read over other people's reviews to ...

This is really good. Just one thing--it seemed to sort of become less abstract and more straightforward in the end. The use of the word scary, for instance...I love the ...

...I love this.

Dark, and well-written. One thing is you might have too many "sadly"'s. People staring, but sadly misjudging. Tattoos cover my body, recognition of my sorrow Sadly it's time to let ...

absorbing and intriguing...I really like how all the different voices of his friends are calling out to him and tempting him in various ways. And, it's priceless how he tells ...

Is this about writers' block? It's really good. I love the lines "I just don’t know why some birds cannot fly, some wait till they die, some people must lie." ...

Really interesting poem. You might try making it flow a bit more, play around with synonyms. But I really liked it! Very good :]

Fascinating like all the others. I was kind of confused at a few points--was Violet being possessed? I assumed that she was and then she snapped out of it when ...

This was really good. Much fewer typos. The way you describe her fear of the dark is good, and your idea of making her face become "ugly" as part of ...

Reganpark: yours was SO not a terrible review. nonsense. xD thank you!! :D i don't really know what happens...i kind of assumed she died...but nothing's set in stone. and yes, ...

edgy, dark, choppy, and brilliant. this, is a poem in a million. i'm not capable of going through it line by line, as it exceeds my mental prowess x) but ...

It's deep... and quietly, calmly bitter. Very good.

I really like this. It looks like it's the beginning to a really good story :] I was ecstatic when I learned it involved vampires. And it's an awesome idea ...