Shakyll

Wow. This is really good. I'm guessing it's kind of a metaphorical place in someone's mind? I love your descriptions, and your wordings. Most of all, I love the words ...

And I hope you post the rest of the story/poem or whatever this is a beginning of :D anticipating!!!!

Well now. I really like this. I like your wordings and your sentence structures :] Very poetic and calm and to-the-point. Just one thing--it's such a somber, "hard" poem, you ...

Masakka My boots rang on the pavement as I headed for the pasture. Fenzari had called a meeting between me, Delilah, Maya and Veronica. I assumed it was to discuss ...

Masakka I stabbed my heels into my stallion's sides and jerked his head to the right. Jasmine's slight form darted down a side street and I urged my horse faster. ...

...REALLY LEGIT.

Masakka My King was kidnapped. My prisoner, escaped. My reputation blemished. My head throbbed. I ran my hands through my hair and groaned through my teeth. How could the enemy ...

Masakka "You don't protect anyone except yourselves and the King. You have no idea what we go through," she snarled. "I don't want to know what you go through," I ...

Masakka Dan "Masakka, are you alright?" I stared at the person who had just entered as I rubbed my jaw. "Yes...I'm fine. What are you doing here?" "I'd like to ...

Masakka Dan I saw her flinch away from my hand, a sudden fear darting into her eyes. Sudden regret flashed through my mind. I hated for her to fear me. ...

Masakka Pretty boy? I took immediate offense. My father used to call me a smoothfaced milking girl. Why did this little witch remind me of him so much? I hated ...

Masakka Cold air wafted by my face as the King brushed past me. "Go babysit the prisoner," he ordered curtly. "What--? Sire, I am Captain of the Guard," I said ...

I really liked this, it's just that it was really hard for me to get what was going on...I still haven't grasped it fully xD So maybe you could work ...

Masakka Dan I fought the urge to smash the rapacious guard's face into the wall. What a dog. Instead, I hissed a few choice words in his ear and sent ...

Masakka Dan I pulled my heavy riding gloves over my hands, barking out orders to my men as I strode for the stables. "Ylan, get the Fifth off that border ...