Shakyll

Masakka Dan I really didn't feel like having a serious heart-to-heart with Jasmine about our different allegiances. All I wanted to do was fall over and sleep. I didn't want ...

I really like this. It's calm and yet it stabs. It's got an intensity without being too loud. Quite champion. I'm glad to see a poem about 9/11 on here.

I LOVE THIS. Not much else to say. :D

Masakka Dan Cadmus and I circled each other like a pair of wolves; neither one of us overly confident in making the first move. I was grimly pleased to see ...

Masakka Dan Fenzari’s tower lit up the night sky like a flaming beacon. Shrieks of merriment and revelry rang out across the normally somber city. Brief gusts of flame shot ...

This was the best poem I've ever read. Sorry I couldn't say more, but I have zero critique. I repeat: best poem ever.

Masakka Dan I strode down the long halls of the castle, fingering the hilt of my sword and feeling decidedly nervous. It would be an insult not to go to ...

Masakka Dan My stomach twisted inside of me as I walked toward my King's door, and my eyes burned from lack of sleep. I was hardly fit to be the ...

This was a good essay. You did very well. I like how you mentioned people like Hitler and Martin Luther, and how you generally introduced real examples instead of going ...

This is a nice story. :) I love your wording "he could only go up." Champion.

Masakka Dan I pushed through the doors of the dungeon and headed down the corridor to a secluded cell, apart from the raving lunatics and murderers of the main cells. ...

Masakka Dan I knew that Kasis would try to escape. I marched him through the darkening woods, hoping that he waited until my men were around before he tried anything. ...

Masakka Dan The wavering candle-flame flickered in the mirror. I rested my elbows on the edge of the table and stared at my reflection. Dark hollows rimmed my eyes, and ...

Well now. This is really good. I like the hopeless desperation and anger, despair and resentment. I especially like the line "But when you smile that is the only time ...

Awww...this is sweet. I like your words and your sentence structures...I hope you get this girl if you want her this much. Probably could use some smoothing up, a few ...